One of my poems... comment, please!?

I wrote this during my high school retreat; noncoincidentally, the title is "Retreat".





From mounted boxes, curled ivy


Dangles from the balcony


West wind whispers, oh, so light


Ruffling blooms of pink and white


Mountains rule in forest shrouds


While sun shines gold through silver clouds


Soft steps rustle meadow grass


Doe and fawn like shadows pass


The walkway twists without an end


A lake lies sparkling ‘round the bend


Skies of periwinkle blue


Slowly take a fuchsia hue


Then, ever softly, ever slight


Become the navy blue of night

One of my poems... comment, please!?
its pretty good. just i think its just kinda describing something for too long. but good ryhming


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Reply:Wow! its realllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllyy... good!


You should write poems more often!


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Reply:I like it! I write poetry too! It flows ever so gently...
Reply:wow! thats really good.
Reply:that's amazing...you've got talent (Y)
Reply:do you write from the heart